Just a few chapters ago i was having fun with the pace and the story, i was even thinking this was such a fully thought out story(or atleast manhwa since this one has a novel). But after they apprehended the mafia and the Chase family arch it became fast paced and kinda dumb.
Like the moment Gemma had a detective office arch came all meaning and reason became so bad. Like where was the full explaination of that then Raven came with questions about Gemma's first love and sharing stuff about his.ugh that whole arch is bad
I had been waiting for them to find out they were each others first love but not like this. Not how its being portrayed right now. Everything is in between and its the kind i dont like
Just a few chapters ago i was having fun with the pace and the story, i was even thinking this was such a fully thought out story(or atleast manhwa since this one has a novel). But after they apprehended the mafia and the Chase family arch it became fast paced and kinda dumb.
Like the moment Gemma had a detective office arch came all meaning and reason became so bad. Like where was the full explaination of that then Raven came with questions about Gemma's first love and sharing stuff about his.ugh that whole arch is bad
I had been waiting for them to find out they were each others first love but not like this. Not how its being portrayed right now. Everything is in between and its the kind i dont like
This had so much potential