The author had the opportunity to change this dynamic from purely toxic--to slight morally grey or ambiguous.
Hear me out!
So when Yujin wakes up in bed (one or two chapters back), chained and confused. Hunter is looming over him (he hasn't touched him or taken his clothes yet--he's waited a year...he can't wait a few more minutes). He explains he's been waiting for Yujin to wake up because he wants Yujin to admit to him verbally that he needs hunter around, that he craves him like Hunter does vice versa and this was just a stupid game of cat and mouse. Yujin acts nonchalant but there's this intensity in the room that he can deny and when giving the opportunity (Hunter is inches from his face at this point) HE kisses Hunter (even he doesn't realize he moved in first). They do what they do best lmao
Then Aaron explains Yujin is going to stay in this house (this is the morally grey aspect of the story) until he can admit he was being childish or whatever the author wants to come up with. Yujin is pissed but can't fight it because of the amount of bodyguards and staff.
Now for this new chapter it would make this moment even more intense because at this point we know Yujin likes Hunter more than he wants to admit or think about. Because even when he thinks he doesn't want Aaron's advances, his body is not only ignited by his touch and smell but his kiss is so intoxicating that he literally cums in his fucking underwear...this kiss would be the beginning of such a juicy story--because you can't come back from creaming your pants just from a kiss ヾ(☆▽☆)
This in my eyes would have been such a better revision to their already yellow flag dynamic without fully crossing into red/black flag territory and still giving us hot sex.
The author had the opportunity to change this dynamic from purely toxic--to slight morally grey or ambiguous.
Hear me out!
So when Yujin wakes up in bed (one or two chapters back), chained and confused. Hunter is looming over him (he hasn't touched him or taken his clothes yet--he's waited a year...he can't wait a few more minutes). He explains he's been waiting for Yujin to wake up because he wants Yujin to admit to him verbally that he needs hunter around, that he craves him like Hunter does vice versa and this was just a stupid game of cat and mouse. Yujin acts nonchalant but there's this intensity in the room that he can deny and when giving the opportunity (Hunter is inches from his face at this point) HE kisses Hunter (even he doesn't realize he moved in first).
They do what they do best lmao
Then Aaron explains Yujin is going to stay in this house (this is the morally grey aspect of the story) until he can admit he was being childish or whatever the author wants to come up with. Yujin is pissed but can't fight it because of the amount of bodyguards and staff.
Now for this new chapter it would make this moment even more intense because at this point we know Yujin likes Hunter more than he wants to admit or think about. Because even when he thinks he doesn't want Aaron's advances, his body is not only ignited by his touch and smell but his kiss is so intoxicating that he literally cums in his fucking underwear...this kiss would be the beginning of such a juicy story--because you can't come back from creaming your pants just from a kiss ヾ(☆▽☆)
This in my eyes would have been such a better revision to their already yellow flag dynamic without fully crossing into red/black flag territory and still giving us hot sex.
Y'all let me know what you think.