this story feels incomplete af, maybe its the author’s inexperience but the smut & bdsm is lacking from how they describe how “freaky” they are. other than the first couple of chapters the rest is vanilla and the side couple is written poorly. and when the main couple does get together, there’s a lack of romance and want for each other that theyve been building up. i feel like the author built us up and then threw us off a cliff
this story feels incomplete af, maybe its the author’s inexperience but the smut & bdsm is lacking from how they describe how “freaky” they are. other than the first couple of chapters the rest is vanilla and the side couple is written poorly. and when the main couple does get together, there’s a lack of romance and want for each other that theyve been building up. i feel like the author built us up and then threw us off a cliff