feeling a little nitpicky, but the crumbs aren't cutting it. honestly i'm not entirely satisfied with the recent chapters. they feel a little devoid of affection beyond the occasional kisses and eye contact. i wanted to see more attention given to bottom enjoyment, a little more worship and tender obsession woven into the intimacy, while still keeping that underlying tension of them fighting for dominance. like a little nasty talk whispered into rian's ears while he's losing it, or some touching and kissing of enzo's scars. the cuddling bit was good but where is the sleepy pillow talk?? idk they fucked too silently for two people with a lot to say to each other lmao (grunts don't count)
love the power play. i just wish there had been more of a balance between that and the actual intimacy. after the recent buildup and those tender moments following the glimpse into enzo's past, i wanted to see them enjoying each other just as much as they were trying to maintain the upper hand. something about the execution just isn't quite scratching the itch for me and it's kind of irritating
at this point, this power imbalance is starting to feel a little too drawn out. like give us a thin slice of bread at least, enough with the crumbs!!
the organized crime plot is keeping me hooked for now, so i'll keep my hopes up◝ ⩊ ◜.ᐟ
feeling a little nitpicky, but the crumbs aren't cutting it. honestly i'm not entirely satisfied with the recent chapters. they feel a little devoid of affection beyond the occasional kisses and eye contact. i wanted to see more attention given to bottom enjoyment, a little more worship and tender obsession woven into the intimacy, while still keeping that underlying tension of them fighting for dominance. like a little nasty talk whispered into rian's ears while he's losing it, or some touching and kissing of enzo's scars. the cuddling bit was good but where is the sleepy pillow talk?? idk they fucked too silently for two people with a lot to say to each other lmao (grunts don't count)
love the power play. i just wish there had been more of a balance between that and the actual intimacy. after the recent buildup and those tender moments following the glimpse into enzo's past, i wanted to see them enjoying each other just as much as they were trying to maintain the upper hand. something about the execution just isn't quite scratching the itch for me and it's kind of irritating
at this point, this power imbalance is starting to feel a little too drawn out. like give us a thin slice of bread at least, enough with the crumbs!!
the organized crime plot is keeping me hooked for now, so i'll keep my hopes up◝ ⩊ ◜.ᐟ
waiting with bated breath for that bread