My feedback may sound unreasonable since I'm only chapter 19 in, and once I've calmed down, I may come back and give this a shot again. I love love LOVE mpreg and fans have marketed this story using MC's pics in his baby bump, which is rare and that's why I'm hungry for more, so it lured me to read this. But *sigh* — this is so predictable. Their dialogue, decisions, and overall characterization were downright textbook. Every seconds in this story, I couldn't help slapping my face. The more predictable it gets, the more it irks me.
As for the plot, the only thing I find ridiculous is how the creator made it so ML had so EASILY marked MC just like that. But the overall premise is interesting. I just think the creator's execution is the problem. There is MC's tragic past with his past lover. Then I'm assuming ML's role is to indicate to MC that there were also good-hearted Alphas like him and he is there to cure the wound that MC's ex lover caused. The story can start and spend some time navigating the effects of MC's ex-lover to his mind, heart and everyday life before ML's entrance. Then after their meeting, MC will initially not trust ML as he should. If things transpired like this, I think I would've been intrigued. In the end.... *sigh*... it is what it is. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
My feedback may sound unreasonable since I'm only chapter 19 in, and once I've calmed down, I may come back and give this a shot again. I love love LOVE mpreg and fans have marketed this story using MC's pics in his baby bump, which is rare and that's why I'm hungry for more, so it lured me to read this. But *sigh* — this is so predictable. Their dialogue, decisions, and overall characterization were downright textbook. Every seconds in this story, I couldn't help slapping my face. The more predictable it gets, the more it irks me.
As for the plot, the only thing I find ridiculous is how the creator made it so ML had so EASILY marked MC just like that. But the overall premise is interesting. I just think the creator's execution is the problem. There is MC's tragic past with his past lover. Then I'm assuming ML's role is to indicate to MC that there were also good-hearted Alphas like him and he is there to cure the wound that MC's ex lover caused. The story can start and spend some time navigating the effects of MC's ex-lover to his mind, heart and everyday life before ML's entrance. Then after their meeting, MC will initially not trust ML as he should. If things transpired like this, I think I would've been intrigued. In the end.... *sigh*... it is what it is. ╮(￣▽￣)╭