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Ngl it started out fine but now the flow of the story is kinda messy, and although I'm all...

Aster November 7, 2026 6:33 am

Ngl it started out fine but now the flow of the story is kinda messy, and although I'm all for the whole "show, don't tell", this one really threw more new characters one after another with vague information here and there

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