I read this while it was updating and put it on pause like, 10 chapters before the ending so just came back to finish up and wait for more side stories. I remember enjoying it but then it kinda fell off like halfway through. Again, this is a horrible representation of bdsm so I would never recommend this for that - iirc I was mainly reading this for the story rather than the smut.
Imo tho, it feels like mc has a praise kink so I wished they leaned into that more (as observed from the side story) because I just hated that even past the ending, it never feels like the mc really likes the sex at all until it’s more gentle. Even with his input, the play still looked like too much so nothing feels really resolved at all (in regards to their sex preferences).
If you want a similar dynamic (innocent submissive, experienced dom) but executed 10x better (and way hotter imo) then read “the playroom”. It’s everything this story wished it was and has so much more varied plays too.
I read this while it was updating and put it on pause like, 10 chapters before the ending so just came back to finish up and wait for more side stories. I remember enjoying it but then it kinda fell off like halfway through. Again, this is a horrible representation of bdsm so I would never recommend this for that - iirc I was mainly reading this for the story rather than the smut.
Imo tho, it feels like mc has a praise kink so I wished they leaned into that more (as observed from the side story) because I just hated that even past the ending, it never feels like the mc really likes the sex at all until it’s more gentle. Even with his input, the play still looked like too much so nothing feels really resolved at all (in regards to their sex preferences).
If you want a similar dynamic (innocent submissive, experienced dom) but executed 10x better (and way hotter imo) then read “the playroom”. It’s everything this story wished it was and has so much more varied plays too.