Okay so I would say it was okay MC was kinda naive.... But later he did realise and wanted to cut off thinks so he was understandable. But needed more things from ml... Like dude yes he did apologise on being kinda manipulate and goal oriented at 1st ...and he did realise it too so fine.... Buttt Where is the apologise for the rape (after the grpp drinking) and after finding out about the video??? and during when mc was almost raped by the thug and then ml again forced on mc without getting explanation And the rude talks he did about dignity.... All those were not shown.. The redemption arc could be a bit more better and detailed... Only if that could have been shown...then the story would really be great Because it lacked these stuffs it was just okay..
Okay so I would say it was okay
MC was kinda naive.... But later he did realise and wanted to cut off thinks so he was understandable.
But needed more things from ml... Like dude yes he did apologise on being kinda manipulate and goal oriented at 1st ...and he did realise it too so fine.... Buttt
Where is the apologise for the rape (after the grpp drinking) and after finding out about the video??? and during when mc was almost raped by the thug and then ml again forced on mc without getting explanation
And the rude talks he did about dignity.... All those were not shown..
The redemption arc could be a bit more better and detailed... Only if that could have been shown...then the story would really be great
Because it lacked these stuffs it was just okay..