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I usually give a story a chance BUT

Kiochii November 10, 2026 2:48 am

This story can’t even be classified as a story anymore. There is a Very MINIMAL amount of plot to try and keep people reading but is just nothing but rape, breaking down Leon, and more rape. You can legit read the first few chapters then skip every five to ten chapters and STILL know what’s going on its that predictable. There is no progress 90 chapters in, No change except for who or WHAT has a go at Leon and its just. Honestly I WANTED this story to be good because I love the art style but it’s not. And that is something I normally don’t say but truth of the matter is it’s not a good story. No plot to balance the rape (because I can handle a plot that has rape even between the main characters, I love me some toxic love) no, change, no character development or even destruction GIVE ME A BREAKDOWN AT LEAST!! And I’m not talking for Leon but for his Jailers.
Seriously there are better stories than this that have a similar storyline but MUCH better execution. They may not deal in magic, demons and the likes but they do deal in situations like this better. Cant think of them off the top of my head so people why don’t we start suggesting stories that fall along a similar story trope in the comments and give a small comparison between Dark Fall and your chosen suggestion and why your suggestion is better.

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    Kiochii November 10, 2026 2:50 am

    You know what. My suggestion:
    MBB (My bad boss)
    It is an omegaverse story following a police officer who is a recessive Omega being sent in under cover to a gang and the boss he works under becomes OBSESSED with him.
    It contains rape but the storyline progression is good and the Omega definitely is snarky and strong willed. Not to mention his boss that he is spying on for the police is not the ONLY person after him.