Okay I read a lot of these kind of stories going in and knowing it'll be slop but man this is definitely slop and not really the I'm laughing and enjoying it kind lol.
Like other people have mentioned FL redemption was so simple/easy. Everyone has like a single interaction with her, goes "oh she's different, mannn who would ever believe those rumors, she's a saint!" And it doesn't feel particularly earned. This doesn't mean I wanna see her suffer for like 50 chapters but I do wanna see some conflict/well written earned growth. There was a chance to see something like that with the redhead knight but his valid gripes (even if he was only looking at one half of the story) are just solved in the same night by one action. Like saving a child is big deal but I feel there would still be a wariness or at least a thought that maybe she's just doing this to look good from a person who doesn't trust her. Or he could have even gotten upset because she threw herself in without thinking and made it so the duke had to risk himself to save her along with already needing to save his daughter.
Along with this the prince. Him being weary of her makes sense but then he quite literally does the thing we all joke about "she's acting...different...I'm interested in her now." And it just feels so forced. Again I wouldn't wanna see him scrutinizing everything she does and making her the villain for like 50 chapters but there should be some sort of balance.
Overall not really sure I'm gonna keep reading this when I could just read a different(probably better) childcare/reincarnation narrative.
Okay I read a lot of these kind of stories going in and knowing it'll be slop but man this is definitely slop and not really the I'm laughing and enjoying it kind lol.
Like other people have mentioned FL redemption was so simple/easy. Everyone has like a single interaction with her, goes "oh she's different, mannn who would ever believe those rumors, she's a saint!" And it doesn't feel particularly earned. This doesn't mean I wanna see her suffer for like 50 chapters but I do wanna see some conflict/well written earned growth. There was a chance to see something like that with the redhead knight but his valid gripes (even if he was only looking at one half of the story) are just solved in the same night by one action. Like saving a child is big deal but I feel there would still be a wariness or at least a thought that maybe she's just doing this to look good from a person who doesn't trust her. Or he could have even gotten upset because she threw herself in without thinking and made it so the duke had to risk himself to save her along with already needing to save his daughter.
Along with this the prince. Him being weary of her makes sense but then he quite literally does the thing we all joke about "she's acting...different...I'm interested in her now." And it just feels so forced. Again I wouldn't wanna see him scrutinizing everything she does and making her the villain for like 50 chapters but there should be some sort of balance.
Overall not really sure I'm gonna keep reading this when I could just read a different(probably better) childcare/reincarnation narrative.