The art is bootiful, and the smut is scrumptious, but that's about it. Not a lot of emotional intelligence going on. The problem is not that she slept with him, the problem is that she forgave the ahhhole so quickly and easily. Or not even that, why did she seem more sad than mad? She should've been fuming at the guy for treating her the way he did, not tearfully falling into his arms while telling him to stay by her side. The cherry on top was his smug face as he accepted her love, begging to get bashed in. But people are into the nonchalant type ig. This definitely serves a purpose, and that would be pretty, detailed smut, but that's the only aspect of the story that's well developed. We don't even get more screen time for the biggest engine of the plot - her family controversy! Though, again, that ain't the point. The point is the smut. And this is some good shi. So let's rate it based off that! Ig?
The art is bootiful, and the smut is scrumptious, but that's about it. Not a lot of emotional intelligence going on. The problem is not that she slept with him, the problem is that she forgave the ahhhole so quickly and easily. Or not even that, why did she seem more sad than mad? She should've been fuming at the guy for treating her the way he did, not tearfully falling into his arms while telling him to stay by her side. The cherry on top was his smug face as he accepted her love, begging to get bashed in. But people are into the nonchalant type ig. This definitely serves a purpose, and that would be pretty, detailed smut, but that's the only aspect of the story that's well developed. We don't even get more screen time for the biggest engine of the plot - her family controversy! Though, again, that ain't the point. The point is the smut. And this is some good shi. So let's rate it based off that! Ig?