this story had potential….. i really enjoyed reading about the couple and how the MC was dealing with his anxiety and coming out of his shell thanks to the ML….
the twin plot twist couldve still been done. that could’ve been a great storyline for ML. like he was tired of his brother being his only friend and wanted to experience life outside of being a twin….
the twin could’ve pretended to be ML and the MC and ML finds out blah blah blah. there wasn’t really a need for the rape scene at all…..
to include it okay…. fine… but don’t just gloss over it and make things go back to normal like that that’s where it loses me because it seems like this story wants to be light, funny, silly, slice of life but why add these plot lines to have essentially no effect on the characters…..?
i don’t really have a problem with the twin twist but it’s the way it was written/handled that blows me like omg….
this story had potential….. i really enjoyed reading about the couple and how the MC was dealing with his anxiety and coming out of his shell thanks to the ML….
the twin plot twist couldve still been done. that could’ve been a great storyline for ML. like he was tired of his brother being his only friend and wanted to experience life outside of being a twin….
the twin could’ve pretended to be ML and the MC and ML finds out blah blah blah. there wasn’t really a need for the rape scene at all…..
to include it okay…. fine… but don’t just gloss over it and make things go back to normal like that that’s where it loses me because it seems like this story wants to be light, funny, silly, slice of life but why add these plot lines to have essentially no effect on the characters…..?
i don’t really have a problem with the twin twist but it’s the way it was written/handled that blows me like omg….