the first chapter had me interested but my god is the pacing soooooo fucking fast omg.
also, they have no chemistry so every scene feels so #forced so far BUT if i can #perv out the scene where the tip accidentally slips in … fucking delicious and he cums from how tight it is… #justthetip that will always be great. excellent. amazing. hot. sexy. fun. i need more of those scenes. #pervingdone
comedy is hit or miss…. i loved how he died and the entrance to his grandpa’s birthday celebration….but other than that eh.
i don’t know if it’s to keep reader interested with the smut but hopefully it slows down cause i am liking the idea of ML’s body being taken over by a ghost and how that ghost lives… i especially love the fact that the fake #him feels everything the real ML feels….
i’ll take this story for what it is which is entertainment and nothing more.
the first chapter had me interested but my god is the pacing soooooo fucking fast omg.
also, they have no chemistry so every scene feels so #forced so far BUT if i can #perv out the scene where the tip accidentally slips in … fucking delicious and he cums from how tight it is… #justthetip that will always be great. excellent. amazing. hot. sexy. fun. i need more of those scenes. #pervingdone
comedy is hit or miss…. i loved how he died and the entrance to his grandpa’s birthday celebration….but other than that eh.
i don’t know if it’s to keep reader interested with the smut but hopefully it slows down cause i am liking the idea of ML’s body being taken over by a ghost and how that ghost lives… i especially love the fact that the fake #him feels everything the real ML feels….
i’ll take this story for what it is which is entertainment and nothing more.