the plot was good and it's okay being a short read, but it would've been better to see some development with them and her family after escaping that fuck ahh count imo. that couldve been season 2 or smthn. like what most comments say, smut is top tier if you ignore the fact that both leads are minors though their first intimate moment was when they were around 17/18, even though every bit of it was consensual for both, that its realistic for teens to explore themselve or considered normal in this plot's timeline, drawing sex scenes of minor characters is STILL cp. fiction & nonfiction alike. we leave that shi to themselves, its not necessary to showthat to the readers/audience bc its clearly problematic and says a lot about the author. i wish smut came after maybe when she's (maybe desi too) about to graduate from the academy, assuming it would take about 5 yrs like her sister bc then ml/fl would in their 20s. otherwise its up in my josei list.
the plot was good and it's okay being a short read, but it would've been better to see some development with them and her family after escaping that fuck ahh count imo. that couldve been season 2 or smthn. like what most comments say, smut is top tier if you ignore the fact that both leads are minors though their first intimate moment was when they were around 17/18, even though every bit of it was consensual for both, that its realistic for teens to explore themselve or considered normal in this plot's timeline, drawing sex scenes of minor characters is STILL cp. fiction & nonfiction alike. we leave that shi to themselves, its not necessary to showthat to the readers/audience bc its clearly problematic and says a lot about the author. i wish smut came after maybe when she's (maybe desi too) about to graduate from the academy, assuming it would take about 5 yrs like her sister bc then ml/fl would in their 20s. otherwise its up in my josei list.