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Wasted Potential

THallows November 12, 2026 4:56 am

This story had several unique twists to it that set it apart from many others in the genre, not to mention great characters and art...but that pacing. It was always a little rushed, even in the beginning, but it really wasn't that bad, it just felt like quick paced story telling, I can get behind that. BUT HOLY HELL what happened to the end there?

We spent more time watching her be stuck in a crib than we did with her after the 3 year time skip. It felt like the 3rd season got cancelled or wasn't renewed or something and the author had limited time to wrap up the plot. Why else would we spend so much time building things up only to end it all in like, three chapters? Clearly things were meant to be more drawn out or have ended differently altogether. They even set up a potential future love interest (I wasn't particularly looking forward to it tbh, but my point still stands)!

I dunno who's decision it was to cut things short, but it's a crying shame when we have so much copy and paste, dime a dozen in this genre going around that gets 100+ of long winded melodrama plot we've all seen over and over again, but something that's actually got some originality to it gets screwed over

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