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I almost lost the adoration I have for the characters when the confession and memory erasing part. But the story structured well, have valid reasons for their decisions, and is self aware.
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I almost lost the adoration I have for the characters when the confession and memory erasing part. But the story structured well, have valid reasons for their decisions, and is self aware.
I love how this focused on their friendship and how everyone adored each other. Serena is a real sweet girly. This might've been a predictable plot but I enjoyed the characters dynamic.
What I don't get is how Eugene was supposed to be a hateble character for Luke, like what did he do??? Also him trying to put everything in place like what was that all about because it's mot properly fleshed. Newt's personality was plain evil but I also don't get his feelings since the story is supposed to leave the novel's rule yet there's just a shift of fate. Also Eugene pointing out his grandpa's fate but I think it was already settled that he was meant to die. That dude is a big confusing shit.
There's a lot of holes with regards to the premise and everyone's fate after the third life but all in all it was a cutesy story.