I feel like similar childcare stories either introduce the big stuff at the very start and try to do everything at once, or have no big stuff at all and are super boring, or only introduce it after the character has become an adult which turns it into just an ordinary action story with the childcare aspect completely lost.
Here we had a nice basis of Arelyn's Isekai stuff, very good establishment of characters, some character development even, and now the big plot comes (with some foreshadow before, so it doesn't seem out of the blue) I really like that kind of pacing, I think it keeps the story fresh and interesting without being overwhelming
I feel like similar childcare stories either introduce the big stuff at the very start and try to do everything at once, or have no big stuff at all and are super boring, or only introduce it after the character has become an adult which turns it into just an ordinary action story with the childcare aspect completely lost.
Here we had a nice basis of Arelyn's Isekai stuff, very good establishment of characters, some character development even, and now the big plot comes (with some foreshadow before, so it doesn't seem out of the blue) I really like that kind of pacing, I think it keeps the story fresh and interesting without being overwhelming