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many gripes with this one the art was great in the beginning but then it gets messy and la...

Bonbon November 13, 2026 9:16 pm

many gripes with this one
the art was great in the beginning but then it gets messy and lazy real quick, with inconsistencies and weird proportions as ppl have mentioned in previous comments

also they leave all the biggest issues to be resolved in the side stories…. and even then they get resolved like behind the scenes? (the stuff with the dad)

pacing was not great in general

kinda sad bc the smut was pretty great at the start and i like the two main characters and their younger top older bottom dynamic *sigh*

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