As a person who occasionally enjoys smut, but hates works without plot or affection between the characters... This was actually alright. The development of feelings was indeed a bit random, and the age gap didn't really skip my scrutiny. The lack of further explanation of the previous life and the other characters also kinda disappointed me. But the art was nice, the plot was fine, the couple was ridiculously sweet, and so I ended up overlooking the other flaws in the bigger picture. I could really see the adoration and passion despite this predominantly being an erotic work. And that is something I really appreciate. They're cute together, and I didn't have much problem after Kairi got his memories. I might actually come back to this if I want a sweet smut.
As a person who occasionally enjoys smut, but hates works without plot or affection between the characters... This was actually alright. The development of feelings was indeed a bit random, and the age gap didn't really skip my scrutiny. The lack of further explanation of the previous life and the other characters also kinda disappointed me. But the art was nice, the plot was fine, the couple was ridiculously sweet, and so I ended up overlooking the other flaws in the bigger picture. I could really see the adoration and passion despite this predominantly being an erotic work. And that is something I really appreciate. They're cute together, and I didn't have much problem after Kairi got his memories. I might actually come back to this if I want a sweet smut.