This is a great story and all but this http://www.mangago.me/read-manga/hana_to_ryuu/mf/v...

The size of the head and the body is just so wrong... The proportion.... Why?!

I know! not proportional at all.

I was crying after I finished it,
then your comment made me laugh

This manga-ka has really bad proportions in general. The semes' heads are at least 20 times larger than the ukes' in every one of their manga.

Yeah, but i thought it was cool how you could notice her art slowly getting better as the story went on. By the end of it the art was pretty good. And this is one of the best Manga I've read story wise.

I thought that it comes from a different mandala. The art is different from a chapter to another. Weird