Actually, there are many amateur, great writers that don't have a chance to get published - especially in m/m genre. Not every country is Japan, where yaoi became an actual genre and gained such a popularity. Not every country has a tolerance for LGBT fiction. I know it's not a main topic of your comment, but you seem to think that it's enough to write something good and then you just get published... I also think that people have a right to express their opinions, as long as it's not offensive. That's a point of comment section and there is no rule saying that you have to write praises and nothing more. I have nothing against this story, but there is no doubt that prostitution theme becomes more and more common in yaoi. I'm not really surprised with people saying it's cliché (although I think it's too soon to say that).
Well said, and I appreciate your response. I do understand what it is you are saying. I get disheartened at reading a manga (thoughfully translated) then glancing to the side of the screen and seeing negative thoughtless comments. Give it a chance and read it in the spirit it was created.
I always am amazed at how many negative comments are written. First off thank you to the authors who have had their work acknowledged and published. Don't like the story? Write your own. Second, thank you to the translators that take the time to do all this hard and tedious work so we can enjoy. Cliche? Silly? Write your own, see if you get published.