The first story is sweet but Tokiwa's confession seems a bit messy and abrupt to me. The second is kinda silly and rushed but it's really forward. The third is so so so sexy..~ Fourth is cool. 'Drink from me.' What a pick up line. Worth reading, but a bit short. Have lots of potential though.
The first story is sweet but Tokiwa's confession seems a bit messy and abrupt to me. The second is kinda silly and rushed but it's really forward. The third is so so so sexy..~ Fourth is cool. 'Drink from me.' What a pick up line. Worth reading, but a bit short. Have lots of potential though.