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chapter 44 is so .... awkward.

Burgess November 30, 2017 4:49 pm

It's like half of it was cut-and-paste from another chapter that the author had probably planned, but the editor didn't like. That's why they're wearing clothes during the love scene.

The dialog at the end too. It seems like the author had wrote the scene for something else, but someone else took over the work. "hmmm kyon says something here and lucaon replies, what should we write guys? Oh I know, write ARE YOU GOING TO CHAIN ME? yeah that will fit this scene. "

Still a cute chapter.

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