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Foils all over the place

narutolvr January 20, 2018 9:05 pm

If this story is really completed, then I'm 100% disappointed in the author because then this story was pointless. The author just throws in useless plot points for the sake of them getting together. The MC describes his family as so loving and super important, but they might as well not have been there in the first place, considering they made 1 appearance in 5 whole chapters. Seriously, after he met the guy, the family (that was his motivation for doing anything in the first place) just *poof* disappeared.

And, on that note, we don't know much about the main characters, either. Not even their ages. All in all, it just comes off as a super shallow story that doesn't serve any purpose. Like a PWP without the porn. ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

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    justme January 20, 2018 9:18 pm

    I agree. I didn't even finish reading this because it's so stupid. I didn't feel any connection with the characters and neither of them actually have a personality. They're so plain.