I liked the first story, the characters were interesting and it was funny, especially as their relationship developed. But I was disappointed on the roles (top/bottom), I know it should not matter if you love someone, but for the seme to refuse outright and end up being top just made the story... well boring and not very origional.
It was an old cliché and happens in most stories when a uke and seme fight for top, especially when said uke looks like a uke despite fighting for top. I think I would have enjoyed it more if the uke got top position or at least have them both seke, so switched positions in another chapter. To spice things up!
I liked the first story, the characters were interesting and it was funny, especially as their relationship developed. But I was disappointed on the roles (top/bottom), I know it should not matter if you love someone, but for the seme to refuse outright and end up being top just made the story... well boring and not very origional.
It was an old cliché and happens in most stories when a uke and seme fight for top, especially when said uke looks like a uke despite fighting for top. I think I would have enjoyed it more if the uke got top position or at least have them both seke, so switched positions in another chapter. To spice things up!