The story was sweet and poignant and had terrific potential, but as most new writers do, a lot if the potential storylines were missed or forgotten. That is not to say that this was a bad manga. If it had been written by a hardened pro, it would have been discouraging. However, having been an early attempt at publishing, this mangaka shows tons of potential to do well in the future. Their art is beautiful and consistent and their character development for the main protagonist was well done. Unfortunately, the story and other character development fizzled out about half way through. Secondary and antagonist characters flitted in and out of the story like humming birds. This mangaka has put great effort into their art work and it shows. Now, they need to hone their storytelling skills and combine the fantastic art with a well developed story and characters. They definitely have the potential to do well as a mangaka.
The story was sweet and poignant and had terrific potential, but as most new writers do, a lot if the potential storylines were missed or forgotten. That is not to say that this was a bad manga. If it had been written by a hardened pro, it would have been discouraging. However, having been an early attempt at publishing, this mangaka shows tons of potential to do well in the future. Their art is beautiful and consistent and their character development for the main protagonist was well done. Unfortunately, the story and other character development fizzled out about half way through. Secondary and antagonist characters flitted in and out of the story like humming birds. This mangaka has put great effort into their art work and it shows. Now, they need to hone their storytelling skills and combine the fantastic art with a well developed story and characters. They definitely have the potential to do well as a mangaka.