Sorry, guys! During system maintenance, some functions like comment are unavailable.

Rushed?

MillicentTummy April 20, 2018 4:56 pm

The ending feels quite rushed. Not much pondering nor drama. Maybe Izumi's perspective of the story would have been a good addition to it. Or Yoshioka having regret what was lost and crying his eyeballs out. Izumi withering again and forgetting about Yoshioka then meet again after a few years. Clichés are still good as long as they do perfectly with the story. It's still a good read, though. Just that the ending feels lacking.

Responses
    Lover666 August 8, 2019 2:26 am

    I would've thought that it would've gone back to his Izumi hair color changed and memory loss part again. But, didn't. There was drama around chapters 3 and 4 that resolved rather quickly and although the story ended on chapter 8. I was happy, but wanted a little more.