Yeah i agree woth you, once i read that line i totally lost all interest toward their story. What a major turn off, i found it funny that i got ticked off while reading this chapter.
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Lol , yeah that was a little cheeky, but I think u should finish it , it's totally hot and cute <3
LOL IKR!! I was like wtf? What a mood killer I'm glade he got punch in the face after that cheesy bit .
I was gonna rant about it but then I notice they were about to sex and lost all thought due to the lack of blood in my brain pouring though my nose.
Now If you'll excuse I'm think I need to go to the ER...gotta clear my browser first.
HAHAHAHAHHA that line was supposedly a comedic scheme that failed miserably ahahahhahaha
nothing to do with it.... the stories have NOTHING in common. total turnoff
I was like.. WDF Romeo and Juliet??? yeah they loved each other but they both commit suicide for love? not the best couple to compare love to.... epic fail.
LOL i just find it so cheesy and completely off topic...They have no similarities for comparison lol...
...the moment he starts comparing to Romeo and Juliet, i stopped reading immediately...