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There are ways this could work - but not like this

Calalaya May 31, 2018 7:11 am

Zeus: "I hate humanity because they rape, hey Priapus, go and do some corrective rape yeah?"
Did not leave the greatest taste in my mouth, gotta be honest. There were waaaay better ways to structure this, like maybe not involving corrective rape for one?? 'Cause that really gross?? The only salvageable plot element was the red string, and the design of the mob boss was very good. I like the idea of Priapus! A kind of Aphrodite/Cupid character that joins in the action and then sets up some couples; totally fine with that. It's the mean-spirited plot of "Let's /make/ people a certain sexuality, and also kill them." When the underlying reason of "Let's fuck" is "Because I actually want you dead" that's a little bit of a turn off for me tbh

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    Calalaya July 15, 2018 7:07 am
    This reply will be showed after approved! kclyaine

    Yeah, I know. He's still doing it with the intent of killing off the entire species by causing breeding to diminish faster than reproduction. I understand the concept. That doesn't change the fact that he is literally trying to cause a genocide, albeit a slow one, through "corrective" rape. It's fucked my good sir

    Fuggy July 15, 2018 7:18 am
    Yeah, I know. He's still doing it with the intent of killing off the entire species by causing breeding to diminish faster than reproduction. I understand the concept. That doesn't change the fact that he is li... Calalaya

    Its not real

    Calalaya July 16, 2018 8:43 am
    Its not real Fuggy

    Doesn't exempt it from criticism my dude

    Calalaya July 16, 2018 5:41 pm
    This reply will be showed after approved! kclyaine

    I like my stuff to be the total package personally. If we're talkin' smut, I can't get off on meanspiritedness - I'm not about to say that you're wrong if you do, but personally, I like my stories to be about nice people havin' a nice relationship, and I don't see why sex and love should be mutually exclusive. I also like to leave comments and critique things, and if people agree with me, great, and if not, also great. I think the the amount of normalized rape is yaoi is repulsive and should be called out when I see it, and I'm gonna stick to that. Cheers mates

    Fuggy July 17, 2018 3:41 am
    I like my stuff to be the total package personally. If we're talkin' smut, I can't get off on meanspiritedness - I'm not about to say that you're wrong if you do, but personally, I like my stories to be about n... Calalaya

    Why would you go through the trouble of reading the whole thing if you felt like you werent enjoying it?

    Calalaya July 17, 2018 7:32 am
    Why would you go through the trouble of reading the whole thing if you felt like you werent enjoying it? Fuggy

    For most things I like to give it a fair shake, and to be honest, the art is quite gorgeous. Mentaiko really is a master of his craft, and that's not for nothing, and I was rewarded with the last couple chapters, lucky me. It's honestly, and I say this without sarcasm, a bad habit of mine that I don't detach fast enough when I don't like something, or if I have mixed feelings about it - I let things get under my skin even when I don't need to, 'cause I'm a stubborn little shit haha. Guess I have more growing to do

    Anonymous July 17, 2018 7:57 am
    This reply will be showed after approved! kclyaine

    The author is male ;)

    Fraiser August 20, 2018 7:56 am

    I know this comment is a bit old but I think its really nice to hear someone else's point of view that differs from the mass consensus! I love this book & this author aloooottt but I think its good to call out things that need to be called out on. Even if its just smut, normalizing rape shouldn't keep catching on.
    & I love your critique, so honest! I never personally felt this book was mean spirited but I think you make a totally valid & rational argument. I think its always great to critique & think deeply about the media we consume!

    Calalaya August 22, 2018 7:26 pm
    I know this comment is a bit old but I think its really nice to hear someone else's point of view that differs from the mass consensus! I love this book & this author aloooottt but I think its good to call ... Fraiser

    Aww bless I love hearing from other sides too so this makes me really happy ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶

    Bounce October 19, 2018 10:05 pm

    we all know rape is bad but dude its fucking yaoi wat do u expect

    trash November 6, 2018 1:51 am

    zeus didn't explicitly say that priapus had to rape them. he was the god of fertility, if he wanted to "destroy without blood" he could've made men impotent or infertile and i think that was what zeus wanted. it was priapus who misunderstood. and i don't think it was ill-intent because as zeus had said and as shown in the manga, humans were being immoral and savage. it wouldn't hurt to have a little balance because if it continued, they're the ones who're gonna destroy themselves eventually. that's what's making zeus concerned. not just cause he hates how humans are living their lives.

    trash November 6, 2018 1:52 am

    you're overreacting cause you oversimplified what this story was trying to portray.

    Fraiser November 6, 2018 5:49 am
    you're overreacting cause you oversimplified what this story was trying to portray. trash

    But it's just your guys' opinions.. Who says what is actually right..?

    trash November 8, 2018 5:06 am
    But it's just your guys' opinions.. Who says what is actually right..? Fraiser

    that's true and i agree tho my intent was not be right, i just wanna reassure op that they don't have to be concerned of this story because it wasn't portraying what they thought it did. i didn't just say that because it's my opinion but also because i saw evidences that have led me to have that explanation and interpretation of what actually happened. i just wanted to open op's mind to things that she might've missed or misunderstood.

    but if op thinks the same despite this and if this is far from what they see and believe then by all means i can go my way and accept their opinion wholeheartedly.

    trash November 8, 2018 5:15 am
    But it's just your guys' opinions.. Who says what is actually right..? Fraiser

    but maybe i was being a bit too agressive and condescending. thanks for giving me a chance to reflect. i will apologize to op if it upsets them.

    Fraiser November 8, 2018 5:45 am
    but maybe i was being a bit too agressive and condescending. thanks for giving me a chance to reflect. i will apologize to op if it upsets them. trash

    Aww how kind of you to be so understanding! I thought most people on the internet would curse at me for my response XD. I understand where you're coming from & thank you for being so mature & thoughtful about this!

    trash November 8, 2018 8:50 am
    Aww how kind of you to be so understanding! I thought most people on the internet would curse at me for my response XD. I understand where you're coming from & thank you for being so mature & thoughtful... Fraiser

    nahhh you asked a good question and it's pretty obvious that you have a point, but you didn't say it in a way that seemed aggressive or anything like that so i just tried to get my point across the same way. i hope i answered your question tho.

    thesabrina January 19, 2019 9:09 pm
    Yeah, I know. He's still doing it with the intent of killing off the entire species by causing breeding to diminish faster than reproduction. I understand the concept. That doesn't change the fact that he is li... Calalaya

    its not killing if it was never alive to begin with. Its not genocide if never born. If you have not life then it cant be taken.