I'm sorry but that plot was waaaaay to abrupt! Two pages in and boom! Within one page he's back to the human world and then within five he's back. Maybe this is just because I read the fifth chapter all on its own, but I still think my head'd be spinning.
I'm sorry but that plot was waaaaay to abrupt! Two pages in and boom! Within one page he's back to the human world and then within five he's back. Maybe this is just because I read the fifth chapter all on its own, but I still think my head'd be spinning.