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Good story but the ending was a bit abrupt

xbooxbooxbear June 3, 2018 12:16 pm

I honestly loved everything about this story. I loved the style and everything but the final chapter was disappointing. First of all, we didn’t even get to see their wedding which I was looking forward to. Second, I feel the portal he slipped in was pointless. He literally falls into it and then Yuta is home and poof Mel finds him. Like okay yea that’s cute he spent 10 years looking for him but like it seemed pointless to me.

All in all it was a cute story but the ending was unsatisfying. Was hoping for at least more of the story.

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