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Bad writing

Kat July 16, 2018 3:36 pm

MC has a personality for all of MAYBE two panels, cries so often that when she actually is crying as a major plot point to affect the audience/shock value it doesn’t have any affect, both guys are kinda awful but I prefer the white king because the black king claims to love her but like nearly raped her to make her hate him which is like 0% cool and also??? I find it hard that you would be able to put someone you even marginally like through that kind of pain, get about someone you love. Overall, mangas not a very good read unless you like rhetorical remarks such as “you made her cry, shirayuki?” (Yeah, not shit. She’ll cry over some goddamn vegetables if given the opportunity) and characters who are more “troupe” and less “personality”. The whole story felt really empty. Also??? Rip satsuki’s friend?? What’s the point of adding a friend if she doesn’t even contribute to the story?? She also keeps getting ditched by the MC which is hilarious to me

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