This story was so unrealistic when it tried to be. The author obviously based this in america but I don't think they have a clear understandment of the sex industry here. Or the police department for that matter. That was literally one of the worst "undercover" missions I've seen by a "professional". I get that it's a fictional story but I think the plot was quite... Idk..... Half-assed? And the character development was just sad. He was so homophobic at the beginning but as soon as he is confessed to he says yes? With NO hints of affection toward Donneylly? I thought this was going to be a spicy take on the sex industry but it failed in so many ways. The art is really nice and I feel like the creator may have some talent in story ideas, but I wish they'd do their research if they are going to write a story in a setting they obviously know little to nothing about.
I think the author rushed the ending half way through. It was obvious they planned to do a lot more but instead quickly got the story over. They must have lost the motivation and ideas to continue on.
This story was so unrealistic when it tried to be. The author obviously based this in america but I don't think they have a clear understandment of the sex industry here. Or the police department for that matter. That was literally one of the worst "undercover" missions I've seen by a "professional". I get that it's a fictional story but I think the plot was quite... Idk..... Half-assed? And the character development was just sad. He was so homophobic at the beginning but as soon as he is confessed to he says yes? With NO hints of affection toward Donneylly? I thought this was going to be a spicy take on the sex industry but it failed in so many ways. The art is really nice and I feel like the creator may have some talent in story ideas, but I wish they'd do their research if they are going to write a story in a setting they obviously know little to nothing about.