I don't see what's wrong with the art, maybe you're simply not used to read webtoons, especially from non professional artist, I like it, the chibis are adorable and colors well done.
(I have to admit I hate the hairstyle for the white haired guy for his modeling)
Anyway, it looks promising so far, and I'm glad he didn't take advantage of him while he was sleeping, it's getting rare in bl lately.
I don't see what's wrong with the art, maybe you're simply not used to read webtoons, especially from non professional artist, I like it, the chibis are adorable and colors well done.
(I have to admit I hate the hairstyle for the white haired guy for his modeling)
Anyway, it looks promising so far, and I'm glad he didn't take advantage of him while he was sleeping, it's getting rare in bl lately.