ummmm yall are a bunch of pansies

The only thing that caused them to look bad is cause it was all jumbeld in one big rush.But this is no different than any other long chapter series.Its a shy guy who saved the girl he loved,an used it to get her,an the girl is confushed cause shes falling for him, but since he doesnt know how to show his love in good ways shes upset over it not being mutual.This is all..sigh..its sweet..just too jumbeld