Just me?

Is it just me or the last story was really unsatisfying, like the uke was way to layed back and annoying. He really doesn't deserve the seme, I hope the seme finds someone else other than the crappy uke, he deserves it. It would have probably became a good story if it wasn't so rushed and unsatisfying, like one second they are happy, another he is jealous, another the uke so selfish an wants to kill him self, then they love each other, next they have sex, finally boom everything is a okay. That last story is one of my most least favorites.