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Also, the butler's monologue at the end had me tearing up. What a lovely and caring man :')
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Also, the butler's monologue at the end had me tearing up. What a lovely and caring man :')
I'm in chapter 11 now and I love how sweet and peaceful everything is, but why the fuck did you say "no way" when Shingo asked u if Sumito was better than him in bed? That's wrong dude. He is your lover and as a sign of respect, even if u don't think so, you could have at least avoided answering. I don't doubt the seme's feelings, though I was annoyed that entire arch, but even though he is not used to express his feelings that much, that was one of the moments in which u needed to stand up for ur partner. It just bugged me a lot and it definitely messed with the feel of the story. I think he mostly said it not to lose his front of a "player" and bc he felt seld conscious about being so in love wirth Sumito in front of Shingo, who only knew the playful him, but it still hurt.
Now, something else that felt really off is the slap at the airport. Sumito was wrong to go there uninvited, but the slap was SO unnecessary. SO out of place. Fortunately, he apologized and even got what he deserved afterwards, when Sumito was "reflecting" on his mistake hahahaha.
Overall, despite the moments I mentioned, which feel really out of character and ruin the mood of the story, I really enjoyed reading this and I think this is one of the best couples I've read. They are certain they want to be with each other forever and the love and respect each other deeply. I find their relationship enviable and healthy. I would only have liked to see Sumito taking a bit more the lead during sex hahaha.