Um the kind of story that you said you liked is the one that is cliched af. Only pretty girls deserve to be confident according to what you said. And why do girls NEED to become pretty in order to have guys like them? It's the same old, same old cliche worldwide, that's been practiced down through the ages. Why can't we have something ACTUALLY new and refreshing where a guy dgaf what his partner looks like?
The girl who is bullied and becomes confident is also a cliche. It just puts more onus on the VICTIM to change rather than the abuser, as per the usual tired and old expectations. Good thing that's not what this story is about.
Um it's also pretty sad that you don't seem to realize that what you're complaining about, them not doing anything after having filmed her is not only what is ALSO not a cliche but what has ALREADY been clearly explained with detailed reasons AND what is also considered good character development. Ktbn.
I don't know which you stand for, but it's like you wearing a sock with no shoes going out of the house.
I stand my case.
I'm talking about literature, and the 12 steps in building a story. What you're trying to prove was a thing called "cliché". GET THIS! we all know what a cliché is. Among the 10 genres you use you can create similar stories. Your evidence is proven unnecessary and denied.
This story has a long way to go that is why I'm saying... IN THE COMMENT SECTION. Do you even know what comment is? Do you even need to know?.
I'm saying... What I think about the story should be. This is an illegal site. Your complaints can't be heard. Even if this is a topic section, it is not open.
Case closed.
It's already 44 chapters and still no climax. When are they going to realize that fatty is pretty girl it's as if they saw, they touched, they filmed her and yet they aren't even doing anything about it. Lastly, I hope Mio would become beautiful without the use of magic, cause it's as if she just had surgery. I don't like it, she should become pretty by working hard on it with her own effort. And then so both guys will know the real her and love who she really is especially Dojin. I liked stories like this, ugly girl turns into swan, bullied then becomes confident, so I'm putting up with reading it and neglecting the fact that this story is very cliché . Let me tell you again. 44 chapters and there's still no climax but you can already see the ending.