There are two stories lines in here, so it's coming off as disjointed. The story should either be about the girl from the future, who was about to die, but because of a bored Fox Demon saving her, she ends up in the past (which was what I came here for).
The other option is for it to be about the girl in the past, who is saved by a Fox Demon (who is obviously in love with her) from a life as a Royal consort. Either one or the other, NOT both, especially since it doesn't seem that the creator can balance the two stories well. These are two great storylines, which could really become great stories, if they are separated and given the attention they deserve. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
At the moment, I'm always finding myself more interested in the main story (girl traveling through time) and not the other one, so I get annoyed when given a look into that one. I just don't care for another storyline when the MC and her shenanigans in the royal harem is where my mind is focused on.
There are two stories lines in here, so it's coming off as disjointed. The story should either be about the girl from the future, who was about to die, but because of a bored Fox Demon saving her, she ends up in the past (which was what I came here for).
The other option is for it to be about the girl in the past, who is saved by a Fox Demon (who is obviously in love with her) from a life as a Royal consort. Either one or the other, NOT both, especially since it doesn't seem that the creator can balance the two stories well. These are two great storylines, which could really become great stories, if they are separated and given the attention they deserve. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
At the moment, I'm always finding myself more interested in the main story (girl traveling through time) and not the other one, so I get annoyed when given a look into that one. I just don't care for another storyline when the MC and her shenanigans in the royal harem is where my mind is focused on.