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Plot is good bt story telling? Not that much

Basement Dweller March 10, 2019 3:16 pm

The plot is really good at i love the way it thrills me however i just think that the face similarity is really annoying and plus i hate how the author tries to paint the mc as the manipulator kind of guy then next to a guy who is ready to aavenge his brother i get that you might have to manipulate some peoples feelings in order for them to work for you or so that you can get info out of them but the way the author displayed it is kinda weird and cringey for me just like that scene where the mc said "i thought we liked each other" then he just grins all of a sudden like what is that? If you want someone to believe you dont grin like its a joke or if you are manipulating them try not to make it so obvious at this point on i no longer feel the Mc anymore hes becoming a little bit cliche for me

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