Well it is an interesting and a hot premise so far. Though I admit I'm not a big fan of starting the story first at one point in time only then to zip back to the beginning. Often it is done with no real reason and instead of adding something can actually in some cases detract. But I like the premise and set up for the story. Not only are both the characters strong in their own way, but the situation looks to be one that could be both hot but also have emotional drama. Those are often those I tend to enjoy the most.
Well it is an interesting and a hot premise so far. Though I admit I'm not a big fan of starting the story first at one point in time only then to zip back to the beginning. Often it is done with no real reason and instead of adding something can actually in some cases detract.
But I like the premise and set up for the story. Not only are both the characters strong in their own way, but the situation looks to be one that could be both hot but also have emotional drama. Those are often those I tend to enjoy the most.