why are you still reading if you detest the character so much
He will get there ~*
All hail characterdevelopment!
I agree.
I like this story but I totally agree with this as well. I came to this site in search of yaoi. What I realized right away is that I prefer shounen ai. Somewhere along the line, when you're reading a yaoi, you desperately wish for more depth out of a potentially awesome character and it never happens and it leaves you feeling unsatisfied. Shounen ai does come with it's mishaps too but it's so much more realistic.
I can dislike a character? Have you ever thought authors write certain characters to be ....disliked lol. I can also say that the plot could be better. Criticism is a part of art, and I gave my opinion on how a story I like could be better. Hm?
Yeah, but there are occasionally some yaoi that don’t use sex as the main plot device. I really enjoy omega universes but I’m really hoping the characters round out
Lol yay someone who sees past a down vote (=・ω・=) so many angry people over a legit opinion. Sheesh
Ikr? People don't understand that we're only criticizing the characters and the plot 'cause it actually holds great potential and we actually care 'bout it. Otherwise there was no need to give a fuck if the story had no hope in the first place. It's funny that sometimes people gets so biased with one story that they fail to notice solid facts which you stated above.
Yeah I was actually really excited to know more about Hyesungs background and just him as a character and what he was going to do from now on. Yet he’s still there burning up the family funds, decked out in Gucci, and stuck in heat. I can’t help but to want to see more out of him because I do enjoy the story
No I agree. Not sure why anyone downvoted you for telling the truth. I stan good sex in a story, but ... I'd prefer there to be more story at this point as well since ... they have a kid together, we already get it that the sex is hot. It honestly took me a while to get used to them because x: /no-shade/ I'll be the first to admit Hyesung looks kind of childish and I usually don't prefer that shota feel. But I liked baby Byul and the family so I stayed. I'd like to know more about Hyesung at this point. I think this is more like a sex manhwa with a story, rather than a story manhwa with sex. (That sounds trippy, but it makes sense!) I usually like when there's a nice balance of the two, or really more story. Hopefully we get some development in further chapters. The Haesoo/brother felt like a side road that we didn't need to take. This is really why I don't read omegaverse that much, the whole "heat" thing ends up overpowering development a lot. But I like some of the characters so I am hoping the storyline progresses.
The fact of the matter is that this is illegally downloaded so the author will never see anyone's criticisms.
Lol I know but there's still a comment section for people to state their opinions right.
I mean, if you think 'bout it, personal opinions or criticisms never matters in the first place 'cause no one gives a fuck but people still does it as a human nature and likes to discuss stuffs on fictions.
that's fair
Okay so we can’t state our opinion? Lmao what? Y’all be so weird on here sometimes
not what is said but ok
I have a tendency to like shounen ai better than yaoi because 8/10 times there’s no real plot or clear resolution, just sex to fill the gaps. Like come on. Hyesung is STILL pretty useless guys. No job, no degree, f*cked family background, and not the best at handling byul. Not to mention him and Dojin have barely progressed their relationship. They’re not even a couple! No mutual love or trust, just stuck with a bond and a baby >.< so tbh I’d rather see more character growth and plot now than sex. Sex can come after. I’m so tired of seeing him as the poor guy trapped in his heat and losing out to his literal animalistic instincts. Like sheesh