One word: frustrating af. And when the readers start to feel frustrated while reading a story, this is not good; there's something missing. I think the author really made an effort to write a long-slow progressed and quite complex plot about incest-not blood related brothers, with many problems/events happening, and the efforts are appreciable, though some bad writing (or translation?) make the whole confusing as fuck! It looks sometimes all of over the place, dispersed and lost. The fact that many questions remain unresolved or that problems keep pilling up without finding a solution contributes to the confusion. Personally, some actions of the characters ennoy me really, like that tendancy of the MCs to sleep or cheat on the one you love for whatever reason; the lack of communication... Aside the mother and the gramps, I find most characters not likable, cheaters and easy, childish. Particularly, that friend of Satoshi is ennoying as hell, same for the sex-addicted porn friend of the Prince of Nichoume, Isaka... All this is not funny; this is too slow and ennoying, and the plot gives the impression sometimes that their romance is lost in not-related problematics. The design and concept of "double-life" of the Seme is a nice idea, but then the both versions are soo different from one another it seems it's not the same person anymore (Prince VS his version glass guy), the personality is also too appart from each other. I'm always like, "who are you?"... Too much importance given to side characters and not enough to the romance or MCs's relationship...
One word: frustrating af. And when the readers start to feel frustrated while reading a story, this is not good; there's something missing. I think the author really made an effort to write a long-slow progressed and quite complex plot about incest-not blood related brothers, with many problems/events happening, and the efforts are appreciable, though some bad writing (or translation?) make the whole confusing as fuck! It looks sometimes all of over the place, dispersed and lost. The fact that many questions remain unresolved or that problems keep pilling up without finding a solution contributes to the confusion.
Personally, some actions of the characters ennoy me really, like that tendancy of the MCs to sleep or cheat on the one you love for whatever reason; the lack of communication... Aside the mother and the gramps, I find most characters not likable, cheaters and easy, childish. Particularly, that friend of Satoshi is ennoying as hell, same for the sex-addicted porn friend of the Prince of Nichoume, Isaka... All this is not funny; this is too slow and ennoying, and the plot gives the impression sometimes that their romance is lost in not-related problematics. The design and concept of "double-life" of the Seme is a nice idea, but then the both versions are soo different from one another it seems it's not the same person anymore (Prince VS his version glass guy), the personality is also too appart from each other. I'm always like, "who are you?"... Too much importance given to side characters and not enough to the romance or MCs's relationship...