That was a lot of fun. I want more. Some of the little mysteries were obvious, other times you cock your head to the side and wonder how the conclusion of guilt was solved so easily. Even when that happened, it always had a nice string drawn from clues to conclusion... well, after a little explaining. I enjoyed the romance part too. The annoying boss at the beginning of the story was a misogynistic, sexual harassing jerk, but he did make a point. He said that he thought she'd resigned to become barefoot and pregnant. He made it a form of ridicule, but it was along the lines of what she had wanted, until she met her true potential. Her fiancé was perfectly fine with her keeping working at first, because he was still the stronger of the two and wanted the money... he got very nervous when she started to slowly realize her potential... The inspector though, he liked her more and more the stronger she became. Overall, one of the most enjoyable stories I have read in awhile..
That was a lot of fun. I want more. Some of the little mysteries were obvious, other times you cock your head to the side and wonder how the conclusion of guilt was solved so easily. Even when that happened, it always had a nice string drawn from clues to conclusion... well, after a little explaining.
I enjoyed the romance part too. The annoying boss at the beginning of the story was a misogynistic, sexual harassing jerk, but he did make a point. He said that he thought she'd resigned to become barefoot and pregnant. He made it a form of ridicule, but it was along the lines of what she had wanted, until she met her true potential. Her fiancé was perfectly fine with her keeping working at first, because he was still the stronger of the two and wanted the money... he got very nervous when she started to slowly realize her potential... The inspector though, he liked her more and more the stronger she became. Overall, one of the most enjoyable stories I have read in awhile..