Wot? So someone like blondie repetitively trying to force themselves on someone does not warrant the opposite kind of repetitive response? Wow. Also it's really annoying when people like you aren't satisfied with any kind of storytelling at all but can't deign to show us how 'excellent' your skills are in that area. I mean you people are complaining when the flashbacks happen too quickly or when they happen too slow so when someone tries to compromise you would think you would finally be happy. But nope, gotta complain about that as well. Entitled much?
why are you randomly bashing a person who just commented on technical parts? It is ok to expect some refined work and every artist gets criticized. That's how they produce better work. Different opinions.
thank you for understanding what I meant
I just said things that might've made the story better, the things I mentioned are usually what makes mangas popular, also what (and I cannot stress this enough) thee fuck does being entitled have to do with this? I work with comics daily as its my job of 5 years, im also a typewriter on here so ive read my fair share of stories so I know what makes a typically good manga and what doesn't. unlike you I cae with constructive criticism
there's so many flaws with this manga, I wish we'd gotten a little more In depth with the characters in the beginning, like what schools like and their social life as well as how blonde guy and black hair guy came to know each other. the author rushes that but makes extremely long and boring sex scenes, black haired guy keeps repeating himself as well as blondie, it gets repetitive as hell. good art tho ill give em that.