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Ikr! Pink hair girl is so useless, she cant do anything but runs her mouth alot!!! I dont get why the author even put romance between mc and pink hair girl!.!? Theres too much deus ex machina here.... everytime mc cant win, either his friends show up, or like aquaintances or the black and white god people inside him.....
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Although the manhua is good there are some things that bothers me a lot.
1. Out of all the girls that is around Ye Yun, the author had to choose the only one (thats not an enemy) that is annoying and arrogant to show up the most. She acts like she is strong when she is not and acts without thinking of the consequences. She also keeps using her father's position to show off.
2. There are too many characters. They also only show up for a short scene then disappears to show up again later on. I can't keep track of them all. There is too much going on and you do not know who is on Ye Yun's side or his enemy.
3. Ye Yun is a bit stupid who keeps falling into traps. He needs to use more of his brain and stop trusting people who have a potential to kill you, especially when they were just about kill you.
4.You would think that since he is strong and has a lot of enemies, he would at least killed one by now. Not once has he killed one by himself. Seriously, would you please stop sparing their lives when they harm you.
5. Many enemies keep escaping when they are about to die and those who do die comes back later in the story without explaining how they are still alive. If they die, make them stay dead.
5. Halfway through the story, it no longer became Ye Yun becoming stronger to reach his "goal" but just keeps getting sidetracked with helping that pink hair girl and other things. At least it is getting better when he left the girl.
Can you tell how annoyed I am by this.