The transition between chapters is choppy and I'm not really able to follow the story or its characters relationship problems. And also, what the heck is with Danny's underwear in the latest chapter? It was so jarring and strange by its design that it took me out of the mood. It looked like it didn't belong there initially. Which I guess, by the way his night is going, its true place would be thrown on the floor.
The transition between chapters is choppy and I'm not really able to follow the story or its characters relationship problems. And also, what the heck is with Danny's underwear in the latest chapter? It was so jarring and strange by its design that it took me out of the mood. It looked like it didn't belong there initially. Which I guess, by the way his night is going, its true place would be thrown on the floor.