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This is how I read this, because it's repetitive

Evilcookie August 11, 2019 5:30 am

I now just skim the first part to see what her plan is and then skip to the end to see how it fails. This story doesn't make me laugh, cringe, or even angry. There is no surprise or uniqueness in this story, it lost it's spark (for me) in the 5th chapter.

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    Chibimaru November 29, 2020 11:04 am

    It lost in the 2nd chapter to me