Is it just me or does it feel like this series is in serious need of a proper editor and some fact checking. It would have made the story good instead of just okay or downright frustrating at certain points.
There are parts that have had so many plot points added with no explanation and does nothing for the story except to confuse the reader (not sure if it is because of lack of editorial advice or lack of planning).
A few of the scenarios would have been more believable with some fact checking or added detail.
Is it just me or does it feel like this series is in serious need of a proper editor and some fact checking. It would have made the story good instead of just okay or downright frustrating at certain points.
There are parts that have had so many plot points added with no explanation and does nothing for the story except to confuse the reader (not sure if it is because of lack of editorial advice or lack of planning).
A few of the scenarios would have been more believable with some fact checking or added detail.