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The first chapter was a complete dud. The plot sucked and the characters weren't likable. ...

Lover February 5, 2014 8:12 pm

The first chapter was a complete dud. The plot sucked and the characters weren't likable. The second chapter was okay... But also rushed and. Not smooth. The third was the best, with a short yet still substantial plot. The last held the best chemistry. The I first chapter had no chemistry at all. The art was okay...

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